The Alienation of Mrs.Goodwin

We just finished the first two pages, of the first issue of the new series - The Alienation of Mrs.Goodwin. It is unrelated to the Mrs.G series, Mrs.Goodwin is yet another incarnation of me , lol... The difference with this one from Mrs.G will be that the issues will be part of one big story. Very excited! Please tell me what your thoughts are on the first two pages! Did I succeed to catch your attention? (If any of you btw haven't read my previous comics, just to remind you that they are available for buying here on Patreon in digital versions, and also on mrsgcomics.com you can find links to buy the kindle and paper copies version on Amazon )